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Anonymousover 13 years agoDamn, you write well.
Loved the slow build, the internal dialogue, and the arc of their own latent attraction driving them into the final shots. Beautifully done.
Oh, and your spelling and grammar are outstanding.
Sithspitover 13 years agoTop notch, one of the best, ever. Nearly flawless spelling and grammar, good pacing start to finish, believable tale and HUMOR. Oh my God, there's actual, funny humor, too! Five stars without a doubt.
cinnamon_kisses12over 13 years agoJesus Christ On a Cracker *****
Verrrrrry good story! And between you and me, 7 inches is plenty ;)
Anonymousover 13 years agoGreat story
I grew up in Eugene and loved the references. You write in a very sensual, yet comedic style that keeps everything moving nicely. Well done!
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