All Comments on 'Sex is a Job Description? Ch. 12'

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LessGoLessGoover 10 years ago
I love this story!

I especially love our hero. Young, naive, handsome and brave! Love it! Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Entertaining Story, Lacks Polish

Once again I read through your stories, finding myself skimming through the (remarkably well-written) sex scenes in order to get to the story, my erection wilting in my hand.

Joking aside, I really enjoy your work, but I've always felt like the world you have created is a little "off". It's hard to describe, but lack of details in a few areas seems to confused me and makes it hard to relate to some characters. For example, I don't understand why being from the Seventh Circle of Hell qualifies as something bad, or what such a status even implies. I also do not understand the Demons' motivations, beyond sex. (Why do Succubi and other smoking hot Demons need an escort service to get off? Is it simply because regular mortals suck at sex?)

Another major detail I seem to not understand is the concept of Hell. Is it an afterlife? Or just another plane of existence? You've said there are Angels, so is there a Heaven? What does any of that mean spiritually? (While on this topic, why does being a Christian attract Trolls? I mean, what really quantifies a 'Christian'? Is it by birth? Personal beliefs? The Troll can smell true believers? What if someone is a massive hypocrite spiritually and doesn't really follow the religion but still claims membership?) Also, what happens if you die while in Hell? Do you go to Hell Squared? Can Demons die? Do they "respawn" in Hell after they are killed? (You seemed to imply this last bit when talking about Veronica's previous husband, and Jerhme saying something about death not giving him relief).

DmitryDmitryover 10 years ago
Great

story. Have been following it for a long time. Thank you very much. Please do not stop. 7*

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