All Comments on 'Sex Slave Ch. 01'

This has everything a good story should have: an intriguing and original plot; excellent unfolding characterisation; and sex, raw, passionate and tender. Wonderful writing: you took me with you with every convincing word.

You've earned yourself a place on my select list of favourites.

Five stars.

You had my attention from the very beginning. Very good story.

Very enjoyable read. Keep up the great work!

A really sophisticated amalgam of bondage in the extreme and sexual gratification in the wild! Well done Allusive1 (and I like your avatar too.)

You touched on so many different aspects of human character and tied it all together. Hope you are working on the next chapter!

Thanks for all of your wonderful, inspiring comments -- they are motivating me to write more. I have submitted the next chapter and it should be up any day now. Enjoy.

Market level top class. Even given the glorification of violence. Such exists and has to be addressed and dealt with as Best. This is true authorship.

Thuis story was hot. Althought it was a bit confusing at the beginning it turned into a hot tale. Keep writing you got a gift.

i love this one...