All Comments on 'Sex Slave's Enormous Problem'

THIS NEEDS A SEQUAL

Definitely needs a sequel.

...but it sure as hell needs an editor.

Please please please write a sequel. I love this story so much. I hope that you are able to have an editor to help with direction and advice/grammar editing; but this could be made into many different stories. Every girl there has a story and all cannot be the same. Love your writing! <3

..... for the author to explore relatively uncharted avenues. Enjoyed the first chapter immensely, and looking forward to the next with great anticipation. Well done.

Complement and compliment are different words with different meanings. Likewise with detract and distract. Both are used in the wrong sense halfway through the first page of this story. Spellcheck is of no use here, as all four words are in the dictionary. You need an editor, and to avoid spellcheck. Spellcheck is for those who are not only good spellers, but who also know the meaning of each word that comes up. Not the case here. Good luck!

Stumbled upon this and enjoyed it thoroughly, well done. Looking forward to hearing more about her servitude.