All Comments on 'Sex with Mother in Disguise'

PITCH black, not pinch.

Stick to your day job.

Keep it realistic!!! The dad has probably a hairy chest also his voice is different than yours so the mother should have know that it was her son in my eyes you messed up big keep it realistic

Your point of view, and your perspective for narration, jumped all over the place. If English is your first language, you suck at it. If it's not, you still suck at it, but at least you've got an excuse for being such a shitty writer. I wouldn't piss on this story if it was on-fucking-fire. THAT's how bad this pile of excrement was.

Great Story Part 2 Please with Dad Joining in.

Re the rest of your Critics lighten up and Chill Out for Fuck Sake.

If it wad pitch black how did he take pics

Good story, let us know if she finds out it's you. Maybe a baby to cum.....would love for you to get her pregnant.....

Was she crazy ?,can't tell HOWARD her husband had changed. HOWARD when did your cock get so big ?................................... Wake up and try again.

i was going to give 3 then with his last sentence i gave him 2. What asshole would do that to his mom

Besides being a rape fantasy, it was poorly written with really bad grammar. I think you should take a few writing classes, and this time (PAY ATTENTION) !

Pathetic

horrible, My hard on was like melted ice after reading this.

Dude you have to tell if mom figures it out

rape and worse, the son is going to out her to the world...clearly no redeeming qualities in him!

Damn man you got to tell your mom it was you fucking her

she may not get upset and then again she may blow a head gasket

and tell you get the hell out of her house