All Comments on 'Sexual Discoveries Ch. 04'

by iowamale51566

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
too many holes...

too many holes in your plot. needs better proofing. nice tale otherwise.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Great Story

Keep these type of stories coming as I love to read good ones and not the ones that seem unbleveable. These were good.

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