All Comments on 'Sexual Hunger & Secret Desires'

Now I know why you got the HOT rating girl. Amazing work! I look forward to the continuation of the story.

This is a good start to a story, which could develop into a great one. Its brevity is its chief drawback; it could use a more extensive introduction, and the love scene is regrettably short. However, it is well-written, and certainly deserves to be continued.