All Comments on 'Sexual Salvation'

Don't give up your day job!

Keep writing

You could go two ways with this story. You could make it a one-off, or turn it into a series. Either way would work. Keep writing and have fun!

Total rubbish

What a waste of webspace, and a waste of time. Totally unbelievable, and about as hot and erotic as two slugs making out. No words to describe.

To the anonymous negative trolls. Those who can't write or their brains are too small to have an imagination like to say negative things about others. You keep writing and tell us more about this in-law relationship.

This needs a few more chapters. I'll be waiting for them, Thanks.

He meets an ultra religious woman and is surprised when she sees sex as disgusting why the fuck would he stay if he wasn't smart enough to talk the frigid bitch before to find out her views then fuck him

I love it! Disregard what the anonymous naysayers put in. Ive known more that a few deeply religious types men and women like the wife in this story. Sad. But more pussy for me! Good but short development. Well played tactic to get him alone. Definitely want to read more. 4 stars.

IronCross55

I like "straight forward, determined, even rough sex", as long as that is what everyone involved wants. This story definitely has possibilities. Forget the trolls and keep writing. I'm looking forward to seeing another part of the story. Gave a 4 for the writing, not much editing needed, and attitude.

Thanks for entertaining me with this story.

The way she talked was total turn off. 1*