by secret_desires
as the previous comment stated long time between . But hey it is a wonderful story between siblings and the love for each other. Oliver is having trouble to realise that Elizabeth loves him as much as he to her and there friend Billy is remarkable to talk to Oliver around this. feel is if Billy is hiding a secret of his own ?? I hope you do not engage Billy in the love making
Hope you keep this story rolling 5 stars easily Thank you
It has been an incredibly long time since Ch. 3 but these two have stayed with me all this time and there is more to come in their story! Thanks for reading!
I don't know what resurrected your writing, but I am ecstatic you are continuing your novel. I am certainly enjoying your story, and really connect with sibling lovers. Since what is socially acceptable is changing rapidly, what's wrong with this type of relationship? I am eagerly awaiting chapter five.
Why all the fuss its to complicated should have been just siblings not every tom dick and harry. Too much
Curious if you plan on completing chapter 5. Too well a written story to leave it hanging, perhaps a shorter epilogue to summarize where you planned on taking it in lieu of a full chapter.
Nice style and good story.
your story was good to this point . when can we see Chapter #5 and maybe #6 ....
Wow, I’m reading this in 2018 and I was pretty shocked when I saw the authors reply in 2016 saying there’ll be other chapters 😂 I’m really looking forward to read the next chapters, really. It’s a pretty loving story!!!
i love your well-written sexy story. when will we be able to read Chapter 5? i hope soon.
Enjoyed the story and well developed relationship of the charcters. Will you be posting a conclusion to it?
It has been 4 years since you said chapter 5 was coming. Your fans are waiting for the much anticipated conclusion to this wonderful tale. Lets us hope you don't wait 8 years like you did between chapter 3 and 4. It would be a shame not to publish the continuation or conclusion. 5 stars