All Comments on 'Sexual Siblings Ch. 04'

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OrthopodeOrthopodeabout 8 years ago
worth the wait

6 years between episodes may be a record, welcome back!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Keep it coming

as the previous comment stated long time between . But hey it is a wonderful story between siblings and the love for each other. Oliver is having trouble to realise that Elizabeth loves him as much as he to her and there friend Billy is remarkable to talk to Oliver around this. feel is if Billy is hiding a secret of his own ?? I hope you do not engage Billy in the love making

Hope you keep this story rolling 5 stars easily Thank you

secret_desiressecret_desiresabout 8 years agoAuthor

It has been an incredibly long time since Ch. 3 but these two have stayed with me all this time and there is more to come in their story! Thanks for reading!

10towers10towersabout 8 years ago
Eight years and counting. May be a record !

I don't know what resurrected your writing, but I am ecstatic you are continuing your novel. I am certainly enjoying your story, and really connect with sibling lovers. Since what is socially acceptable is changing rapidly, what's wrong with this type of relationship? I am eagerly awaiting chapter five.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
love the story

I hope you write more

OlebillOlebillover 7 years ago
Disappointed

Why all the fuss its to complicated should have been just siblings not every tom dick and harry. Too much

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Keep going

Curious if you plan on completing chapter 5. Too well a written story to leave it hanging, perhaps a shorter epilogue to summarize where you planned on taking it in lieu of a full chapter.

Nice style and good story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Chapter #5

your story was good to this point . when can we see Chapter #5 and maybe #6 ....

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
2018

Wow, I’m reading this in 2018 and I was pretty shocked when I saw the authors reply in 2016 saying there’ll be other chapters 😂 I’m really looking forward to read the next chapters, really. It’s a pretty loving story!!!

goducks1goducks1over 5 years ago
wow - 5 stars

i love your well-written sexy story. when will we be able to read Chapter 5? i hope soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Conclusion to this story?

Enjoyed the story and well developed relationship of the charcters. Will you be posting a conclusion to it?

Rancher46Rancher46over 3 years ago

It has been 4 years since you said chapter 5 was coming. Your fans are waiting for the much anticipated conclusion to this wonderful tale. Lets us hope you don't wait 8 years like you did between chapter 3 and 4. It would be a shame not to publish the continuation or conclusion. 5 stars

KneeKneealmost 3 years ago

Thank you for your writing,please extend to 7 &8,

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Loved it

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