All Comments on 'Sexuality and Dusting Ch. 02'

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marcus48marcus48almost 13 years ago
Alayana

Totally erotic first two chapters. Almost like being in the room with them . Please continue the adventures of Alyana.Thank you x

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

More please! :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Continue to write!

Both of these stories were very well written. You definitely should continue to explore these themes and express them in additional chapters of this series and / or in other stories.

There were a few stray typos, but otherwise the writing was some of the best I've found on this site. Grammar and syntax was very good and the conversation & description of the thoughts of the characters were excellent. The chain of events and telling of the story was well paced.

advent62advent62about 7 years ago
absolute erotic

Sensational n sensual writing. Did Mark finally married Ana? I hope n guess No. Loved yur simple erotic display of emotion. Great. Keep writing.

PS. I not checked yur nmae or profile yet, but u must be a lady just wishing to be like Ana. Xoxox.

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