by Amyboo
You said you lost your erotic writing virginity, well you should be proud. This is well written and erotic.
Please do not stop, cannot wait to read more of your passionate thoughts and experiences.
Ed from Texas
I thought you lost your virginity well. Please continue to write more. Please post a picture if you can so your readers can see what you look like.
I really liked how you wrote this. It was short and VERY sweet. It definitely had me cumming. Thanks, hope you write anther one soon!
Nice short story, but would have been better with a longer background story and buildup.