by bigdaddysmooth
Wow! Great story. Jamie's two lusty companions managed to hold off from blowing their loads a lot longer than I did!
I appreciate the feedback and agree, it's one of my faults as a writer. Anybody know a good editor out there?
Please try to decide whether you're going to use the present or past tense to tell this.
Very hot action, described in delicious detail! Loved it!! Request: Don't use phrases like "population pudding" ever again - it's a silly euphamism that ruins the mood.