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What is this ? IELTS exam ?

Having read a few of your submissions on this site, there's a common thread I see that stretches between all of them that makes it tedious to read or enjoy. Every descriptive sentence contains seven variations of the same adjective! It feels like reading a thesaurus rather than a story. The storyline progresses with sporadic jumps in the narrative, causing the storytelling to feel haphazard and chaotic. Also, every story follows the same pattern, with the characters (both male and female protags) ridiculously similar in each and every story.