by Jamie Smith
This author should proof read there own material or get someone else to proof read it for them. Gramatically this story is very poor. It could have been much better with better writing.
To whoever left the comment before, if you're going to critique someones grammer perhaps you should consider using the correct spelling of 'their' not 'there' as you so incorrectly put it. The story wasn't brilliantly written but it was enjoyable. A good first attempt.
GOOD HONEST STORY, WUISH I COULD HAVE NERVE TO WRITE MINE AS IT WOULD BE GREAT BUT CAN'T RISK BEING KNOWN. SMALL TOWN, LOVE CROSS DRESSING AND WOMENS CLOTHES, THANKS , DEANNE
GOOD HONEST STORY, WUISH I COULD HAVE NERVE TO WRITE MINE AS IT WOULD BE GREAT BUT CAN'T RISK BEING KNOWN. SMALL TOWN, LOVE CROSS DRESSING AND WOMENS CLOTHES, THANKS , DEANNE
Liked the story, Looking for more of the same. As a CD whore I am well aware of the feeling of a cock sinking into your love hole. I get in excess of a thousand every year and still it's not enough. I like going into a park and being raped by a gang. I like to beg them not to hurt my "ass cunt" , knowing that will excite them. I love it when the force two into my ass and two into my mouth at the same time. It's especially good when they finish with me and all of them piss on me. That's hot!