by austin_erotica
I'm so surprised you have no comments on this second part of your story. I find it to be very original and well written. I like the characters immensely and am looking forward to finding out what happens next.
thanks a lot for it.
Can't wait to read the next chapters ...
Have we met all the bastards there are yet, or are you going to surprise us with a truly dark evil one ?
what a treat.
thankyou for this spell binding story.
waiting ... not patiently for the next chapter.
I'm the one who commented re:penis/vagina for the previous installment of this story.
I'm really liking this story so far. Nice cliffhanger. (I hate you, of course, but...nice cliffhanger. :P)
Loving it so far. Can't wait for the next installment. Gave it 5 stars
I like this tale! Interesting world and plot with lots of action. I like how you end the chapters on cliffhangers. Sophina is an interesting character, I wonder how her love for Evelyn will play out.
The author found his way of the story, so I'm not going to waste time commenting every chapter. If the story stops being enjoyable, I'll write. So far it's too captivating ...
Aren't mages different? I mean they live much longer and they can do magic. Also I love this story, but I think it's too actiony and so far has too many POVs not enough Jon. And damn you for naming the lead character after my father. That is just wrong on so many levels, sicko.