by austin_erotica
And another cliff hanger LOL! Loving your work and looking forward to the next chapter.
Waiting for the next episode. I love the series so far. It is a great story. My only complaint is waiting for the episodes to be written.
me thinks that jon is way more than he seams and quite a bit older then anyone realizes and that is what makes this so good, keep this up and you will jave a grand following
I can't believe you're going to let us hang like that. :P Update soon, please. :)
I was thrilled to see another sequel...keep it coming, looking forward to more!
Wow! I'm at the edge of my seat. This story is great. Your character development is great as well your sense of timing and development of plot. I cant wait to hear Jon's story. Keep up the great work! Can hardly wait for your next submission.
irked that Evelyn's guy died though, I foresaw one of them dying from the beginning..