All Comments on 'Shadows of the Moon Ch. 02'

I really like this story so far it's keeping me on edge I want to know what happens! Please don't make it one of those with no ending :(

Please hurry with the next chapter. Amazing story.

Please update soon!

Good start, both chapters, but you need a better editor. Every time I saw ma'am misspelled, I got distracted. Even the very best story can loser a reader if there are writing flaws that bring more attention to errors than the story, because the flow is interrupted.

But keep going. I look forward to seeing this unfold.

You really need an editor.

Keep going! The spelling errors are minor in comparison to the excellent story! Please keep going!

None of you spelling or grammar errors are that distracting, some people just want to bitch. You're doing great!

Decided to re-read this story again, mainly because most of these writers aren't completing their stories. It's still good the second time around. Thanks Izzra.

A Fan,

Annabelle