by Jjonest
The confusion between the plan and the bodily functions got a bit tedious, and that made the whole story pretty unrealistic and so not all that compelling. At least to me.
Your twist on things make for a chuckle or two or more LOL...and I really enjoy your stories! Welcome back and I look forward to more from you!!!
New story line, yay! I'm just hoping he doesn't cheat on Ashley. While the word play was neat, I agree that it was a little hard to read.
Thanks all for the support and feedback. The next story is posted in the fetish category instead of the traditional exhibitionist and voyeur category I usually choose. Hopefully you can find it just as easily.
As for the comment of hoping Jason doesn't cheat on Ashley...you'll just have to read on and see how it all plays out!
Loved this and the previous Shared Bathroom series! Please keep them coming!
I laughed all the way through it. Couldn't help it. Can you imagine this as an X rated YouTube video? Too funny!