by Jjonest
....but not so happy with just this "short snippet" after all this time. I do like the way you write!
I love his relationship with Ashley. The earlier part of the story was almost painful, because of how awkward everybody and everything was. Then when it was just the two of them, there was a palpable sense of relief and relaxation. Can't wait to read more.
Please continue this story. It is so well written and has an excellent plot that is different from the norm.
This is a completely different plot and not like any other. Please make more and your writing is amazing.
Shannon and mark are fucking and they are too fucking stupid to see that
You should definatly be published. But PLEAAAASE!!!! do not stop posting here. Ravage her asshole already I said, ever since she uttered "wax my ass." This story is simply amazing; the slow build up, the intimate situations, how they keep coming so close to having sex yet still have not yet done the "deed." It is truly an assman's ultimate fantasy (I am one and it is;).) Cant wait for many more chapters.
Cannot wait for what happens next! Hope she wants to find out what it would be like with him to make sure he is the "one"...maybe give him her ass as that was what he was asking her when Shannon interrupted them...that Mark and Shannon have already gotten together or want to. Please continue this as soon as possible with your usual creative flair!!!