by Jjonest
Can't get enough of this delightfully different decidedly delicious story! Anxiously awaiting the next surprise!
I am so glad to see that Ashley has a reason to break up with Mark since she clearly is only going through with the wedding because she feels obligated to. She and Jason are a much better match and they both know it. Even if Mark isn't actually seeing Shannon on the side, the fact that he lied to her is enough to get Ashley to act on her feelings for Jason. Looking forward to the shit hitting the fan in the next chapter.
What a magic episode in this teasing adventure. I love the massage theme as I do massage and have had similar fun, but none so combining stimulation and tease.
Should make for a great finale, and some more excitement. I wonder now if Ashley's mum might become a little more accepting with Mark clearly not such a catch.
... that keeps you guessing. I was positive that they were finally going to kiss and then having the water temperature change was an excellent way to quickly put a damper on their actions. The events at the waterfall were quite humorous and the twist at the end certainly left things open for the next chapter. I look forward to more in this series and have enjoyed all of your contributions. A rare 5 stars from me. Thank you.
I am really enjoying this series as it develops. You are doing a great job of writing it with good pacing and development.
I like the humour you brought into this latest chapter with the peeing into the fountain. I think successfully writing humour must be one of the hardest things to do in story writing. I like you bringing the inexperienced receptionist into the pee lark. It was a laugh. The whole peeing into the fountain was believable in that situation and you didn't overcook it and ruin it.
Well done! I look forward to further chapters in this story.
I am really enjoying this series and I haven't laughed so much in ages as I did at the waterfall scene.
More, soon, please.
So glad to see more in this series. Read the first three some time ago. Incredible story. Can't wait for another
Can't wait for the new chapter, hopefully you're able to finish it soon. The ending was a great cliffhanger!
This has been my favorite story on this site! Please finish soon. I cant wait!!
Wow, this series is great fun and very sensual. It's highly realistic too, not the fictitious easy sex banging that never happens, unless you're wasted.
If you want a quick masturbate story, this isn't the one. it's a story!
Well done!!!!