All Comments on 'Shared Passion'

UGH! Is what your comment is worth. Vomit!!!!! The story is worth a5 and that's what I gave it. Keep writing and fuck annony!

Really good story.. continue writing.. on a personal level would love to see a reluctant wife seduced slowly in fron f the husband

Story was OK but poorly written. You need to get someone to 'proof-read' your story as there are too many mistakes regarding grammar and spelling. In places you confuse the 'his and her' ie. his legs instead of her legs etc.

I am being a bit pedantic but that is because with a bit more care it could be a better read.

Forget about anonymous trolls. They obviously have blinkers on and are unable to comprehend what true life and long relationships are about.

I liked your story. I liked that it was a shared experience for the pleasure of both without this humiliation in so many of the cuckold stories. Will they expand their repertoir into a DP? Will she accept swinging with other couples and he be aktive too? You should keep on writing.

unfortunately once I read something like "he opens a white wine" and then in the same paragraph "pours a glass of the red wine" I spend the rest of the time playing spot the mistakes. Everyone needs an editor, I never spot all my own mistakes either. Try again though

Now he got his whore wife. You call this a marriage. It can only end badly.

cuck shit.

cuck drama

The writing is wonderful. Just wished there was some MMF action.

Liked this story. I have read a lot of stories like this but none with the details of her feelings like this story. Also a little class instead of just a fuck story. Can't wait for your next story. Mabey a shared husband story. Thanks for a great story

The storyline is good but predictable. It was merely a question of which of the single men introduced was going to get to bed her. Several unnecessary typos, comes from using dictation and never editing the draft.