All Comments on 'Sharing a Moment'

I hope you continue this story I would love to see how it goes

me and my wife love your story hope it continues had to take a break before writing this lol

Something so sexy about two couples letting their hair down in front of each other for the first time. And you've set it up so well for a sequel!

ryeandgingerayle2@yahoo.ca

As a frequent reader of erotica and beleive me, I can size up a story (that is if it's worth reading) with its first page. I must say I was impressed with your story plan and quality writing. Loved the erotic build up. I was left panting at the end. :) Like the previous comments, I do hope there will be more chapters to your story. This first chapter could be the basis for a great series. Please continue. Cheers !

Erostaticus

Love your story but mostly love the way you wrote it. Unlike many others, you took the time to build up not only the action, but the characters involved. It's not just beautiful people fucking, it's people we get to know better before they do so. And the rythm was perfect as well. Everything unfolds not too fast, but not too slow either. All in all, I loved it and I'm looking forward to another one. Thank you!

A very nice story. I hope to see another chapter, or maybe two, soon.

me and my wife could not read it in one sitting lol and it was as good when we started again really hope you write an ending