by linda1234
... to 'bosom' friends - to lovers - to soul-mates - how lovely! Thank you - five stars.
To find the right one is often difficult beyond the pale. But when one does it could come out like it did in this your story.Not all of us get the right one but when we do we experience Heaven on Earth.
Love Janice
A clever way for two people to write a great story starting without a plan or plot. Please write again soon. Thank you. ChristieP
What a beautiful story, So sexy, so erotic, and so loving. Keep it up, you two!
The full package of discovery, inticement, compelling passion, intense combination of love and uncontrolled sex, all leading to a conclusion of commitment and future together. And without the distractions of lots of coarse language or objectionable references to body waste or fluids... Yep, the full package for stirring erotic fever in me, the reader, and cheering on erotic love wherever it happens to be found.
Really, really enjoyed this...sexy, romantic, hopeful and hot! 5 stars!