All Comments on 'Sharing Her Treasure'

You really need to have someone proofread your work rather than relying on the spell check. I'm not sure just what you meant by " initially the through of a stranger's semen inside her ". I'm guessing " through " should have been "thought"? And I'm guessing that "Danny's cock, strong, young and revile" should have been " Danny's cock, strong, young and verile "? Just a couple of examples of things that made me stop reading and wonder WTF? Things that break the flow of the story and take away from the enjoyment of it. Go get'em mom! Make your future literary endeavors even better!

Enjoyable story, with an unusual theme which works. Get an editor to help iron out the small errors and perhaps reduce the slightly religious stiltedness. Keep writing - thanks.