All Comments on 'Sharing on a Plane'

by archilochus

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Nice

Just a little more buildup and I would have thought this story was awesome. As it is, gave it a good rating, but man what a few more descriptive paragraphs on the plane prior to a 'move' being made would have been incredible. Thanks for writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
very good

i especially like the part about the other man but i think a threesome would have made this story even better. great job, however!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
5 Stars

Hot. Well written. Mile High Club. Student. Covers all the bases- great job!

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