All Comments on 'Sharing - Our First Threesome'

Woulda thought that on Valentine's Day, romance would be less 'suck and fuck' oriented! This story is kinda realistic (comfortable, long-time friends) but that would fit better in Mature.

4*

But not objectionable. Just a bit bland, somehow.

A great 1st story and I look forward to reading more from you.

Critics often tell writers to "write what you know." In my opinion, what you have here is the perfect story. Apparently you know what you're writing about. I hope this is just the First Episode and that you'll write many more ~ as the adventure continues. Thanks for making me smile.

I love this scenario, relaxed friends dropping boundaries. Excellent writing. More please!

Awfully clinical, where is the passion, where is the shared love of friends of thirty years . Also Jennie went 15 years without sex and then just recently thought of swinging with her neighbors. Pretty shallow story. Try again