All Comments on 'Sharing Secrets Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Oh My God!

This is fucking horrible! I didn't even finish this piece of shit!!!

Stop submitting now... Please!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

It the same as part 1.

Showoff888Showoff888about 9 years agoAuthor
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It was a repeat of the events of the first chapter but it was a play on the title: sharing secrets. It was revealing the secret thoughts of two of the characters.

From now on I will be sharing some of their thoughts as well as the story unfolds.

This is Incest and Gay male first time sexual relations and it is a fantasy so partially realistic.

If your not into gay sexual fantasies then this will not be for you.

But, I hope others will like it.

DustyDevilDustyDevilover 8 years ago
something is out of wack

part one and two are identical ,otherwise not a bad start.

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