All Comments on 'Shawna My Daughter’s Friend Ch. 01'

This is a well written story. It has character development and it doesn't jump into sex too quickly. Undoubtedly, you will draw some comment that says this isn't incest. However, the category is incest AND taboo, and having sex with your daughter's friend is taboo in most strata of our society. Please keep writing.

A good story with a good start. It has potential to include not only Shawna but Lisa as well. Sharing is such a good thing. Looking forward to Chap. 2.

Can't wait to find naked Shawna finding "dad" cleaning the cum off the shower door and volunteering to help and licking it with her tongue which causes another monster erection and the logical progression finds them fucking each other's brains out when daughter comes home - hears the noise from dad's bedroom and joins the fuckfest on the bed, dad getting his cock sucked and fucked twice by each one of his "daughters".

Just a suggestion for chapter two. The start is there you'll have to admit!

looking forward to chapters 2&3 you have a wicked mied but grat ty leannxx

leann5red, where did you learn to spell? Did you get your diploma from a box of Lucky Charms cereal?

Nice start to a storyline that shoul lead to a happy everafter dad and daughter 3some!

very good beginning. why were the panties on the floor. was she jilling thinking of dad????

my keyboard broke. its this touch screen keyboard.

what's gonna make this even funnier ~> `SHAWNA` was outside bathroom

listening to everything that was actually going on [of course without him

actually knowing]...... don't go straight into the 3some ;; him & biological daughter

+ shawna... `shawna` has tease him alot more which leads those two to have

least couple of extreme sex romps {all scenes must have phenomenal details}....

neither them actually tell biological daughter she finds everything out being all

her own........... which things of course gonna go from there............. that should

actually be part3\part4 when all of that does happen