All Comments on 'Shaza's Tears Ch. 06'

The moderators keep deleting the point of view at the top of this chapter. I have edited and edited this chapter asking them to keep it up but they have refused to do so.

This chapter is from the point of view of Nejua.

Due to some issues I've been having with my work being tampered with as i post it... I am moving my activity to other websites. I am disappointed with how things are conducted here, and at some point I will be taking down my work here as well but I'm too frustrated to deal with it at this moment.

I'm sad to go as this website has high traffic, more so than many other sites I will be posting on... but its not worth the hassle. You can find me on social media if you wish to follow my work further, as I will be sharing my updates there, and you can follow the links to the other websites I'll be working on. instead of clicking on each link separately, you can choose to go to my Linkree, which has a list of all the places i will be.

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This has been an exciting journey, and I've only just begun. Thank you for your patronage.

I’m sad that you had such trouble on Lit., but you must be able to express yourself without restriction. I just randomly stumbled on your writing and thoroughly enjoyed your style. I do wish for longer chapters, as the break of having to look for the next section takes me out of the narrative, and the pleasure of a fascinating world. My other criticism is the capitalization of tears, whether it refers to the material, or water from the eyes, or tearing something apart.

The world is beautiful, the characters are relatable, the memories shared by Mehkel<sp> are especially poignant, and I am fascinated by the geopolitics of this universe that you have created. I am sorry to see this story have to leave literotica.