All Comments on 'She Asked For It!'

wife did note say good bye or give my a kiss.so go for it have a nice time whith your stepdaughter yours leann xx

Juvenile shyte and, learn to spell your "own" name.

Go back and read Quinn Rogan for some ideas on how to write sans some of the smut around today. Look here -- http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=35760&page=submissions

Sadly he and some of the serious writers have long gone. The site seems to have descended

to the point it's really a bore.

The whole thing was weak.

The story killer word was used again, can't authors learn the very basic terms for this kind of writting? ITS "CUM" FOR AN ORGASM OR SEMEN NOT 'COME' use the commonly accepted or don't submit stories.

is just showing his (has to be male) myopic ignorance. Again.

Only problem I had with this was: they were in the bathroom exposing themselves when "...I picked her up and tossed her onto the bed behind her..." This really broke the flow of the story.

..I would miss them but it would be nice to have some fun with the wife without worrying about being quiet or having one of them knock on the door.

@@@ fuuuck, I would never be quiet for the kids! Let em put on headphones or jack/jill off, we're making noise! ....as for the door, door hanger saying 'do not disturb, 'rents fucking!' Hehe @@@

I never thought about Carrie sexually but I am a man and I absolutely enjoyed watching her first thing in the morning or just before bed.Because she would always be dressed in something skimpy if it was warm or tight and form fitting when the thermometer dipped.

@@@ why do they always lie in these stories?! Guys ALWAYS think of good looking girls sexually, family or not, young or not! Its just a fact! @@@

Carrie slipped into the bathroom without opening the door any wider. "can I see you without the robe again?" she muttered.

"I don't think so! Are you out of your mind?" I said rather sternly.

Unaffected by my terse response Carrie said "I never saw one that big before. I just wanted to see it again...Please!"

I am well endowed at a bit over eight inches long and six inches round. Carries request made my cock jump a bit and start to fill. As MY mind was racing I reached down and gave it a tug absent mindedly.

"Carrie get out of here now!" I yelled. But Carrie just smiled and stared at my hand on my cock.

@@@ ...see, a bit unrealistic... Any guy would show her! Hell, he might pawn off on fucking her right then, especially if the wife was coming home, but between a hot girl asking AND inflating his ego? Not a chance he would say no! @@@

In one swift motion I picked her up and tossed her onto the bed behind her and dove face first into that sweet wet pussy.

@@@ aha! Now THATS realistic!! @@@

I really liked this one, a bit short but no nonsense and bullshit free ;)

Only gave it 4* because it was too short....LOL!!!! MORE PLEASE!