All Comments on 'She Becomes More Than Just a Vet'

JUGGLER=jugular, THINK=thick, and more... such errors distract from the story, IMHO.

I knew what you meant, and it did not put me off reading it. A lovely story, one that I enjoyed very much. Hope there's more where that story came from. Keep writing, I'll keep reading.

This started out SOOOO strong for me. The writing, story etc.. but then BOOM! I got totally sucked in after the first few sentences. I would have loved a lot more story-wise as it really had major potential to be a great read. Definitely keep writing. You have a great mind and could write some really amazing pieces.

This was more like a build up to what seemed to be a much longer story. Then bam it was the end. That is why I gave it a 4.

Too fast too easy, sex doesn't come that fast ever unless you are with a hooker or someone you have a close relationship with.