by oaky
for having sex with a guy months after they broke up?
Why is this in LW?
If you want to maintain ONE shred of self-respect, NEVER accept an obvious mercy fuck! It is worse than publishing a poorly edited story with obvious word omissions and grammatical errors (but not much, since a lot of people SEE the latter, and even the mercy fucker feels kinda good for donating the former!)
3* (agree VERY marginal LW, since they USED to be a couple, but are now only roomies!)
I'm happy about one thing: That this was an extremely short tale.
HA Ha ha
errr, Okay I meant. Thanks for writing.
tom anon
Hello all. Thanks for your comments. I'm new and I guess I have lots to work on! Perhaps I posted it in the wrong category too.
It was a nice first try and actually fairly well written. It seemed a bit rushed and left a lot of meat on the bone. I look forward to your next attempt.
It's called a mercy fuck for a reason - and anyway a fuck is a fuck is a fuck. 4*
Keep writing.
but I liked it anyway. I've been there, but not exactly. I've had a couple of ex-gfs who continued to be "with benefits". We knew there was no future, but there was friendship/comfort sex. It actually was pretty great-kind of paved the way to the next thing.....I liked the story-showed that sex can be an expression of caring and comfort.
I would imagine it was terrible for him to hear her making love to another man when he still loved her.
Thanks for the read.
Well that is certainly one of the more sincere ways a good looking woman can show she's sorry . Good appetizer as a read. I like how the author took a healthy share of the blame in the two people not clicking as a couple. .
A very mature though abbreviated portrait was drawn as to the whys and wherefores of the breakup with no demonization of either party . In Literotica ... thats more then a little uncommon.
That if she truly still cared for him she would not have begun dating so quickly and sure as hell wouldn't bring the boy toy home with the ex still there. How could he not hear the goings on in her room? " you weren't supposed to hear"?? Not likely! Pretty callous behaviour on her part.
I miss those tits
It should be in the non consensual section.
I enjoyed reading this one. I can't understand the thinking behind some of the petty comments.
It's a look at a failled relationship between people who are sexually attracted, but one of them wasn't happy professionally and his unhappiness affected the relationship. They were better as friends with or without benefits. C'est la vie!
It's a moment in time, a relationship ending but not over, the pain, and finally the end. Don't listen to the critics and don't let the bean counters tell you what does and does not belong in the Loving Wives category. Good effort.
Sometimes it just works that way. My ex and I couldn't let go of the sex for over a year
When I was in training to become a psychiatrist, our mentors would remind us that “life is a series of losses.”
Joy then sorrow (C.S. Lewis: That’s the Deal). Eighty percent of relationships don’t make it. Lots of sadness.
We’ve all felt OAKY’s experience and sadness in one way or another. Feelings linger, often for years.
Does anyone really forget someone they cared about? Hope not.
shr