All Comments on 'She Comforts Me'

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tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
GROWING APART

and the EGO took over and challenged the ID...TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
The obvious question

Why is this posted in 'Loving Wives?'

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Promiscuous?

for having sex with a guy months after they broke up?

Why is this in LW?

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 11 years ago
Mercy Fuck

If you want to maintain ONE shred of self-respect, NEVER accept an obvious mercy fuck! It is worse than publishing a poorly edited story with obvious word omissions and grammatical errors (but not much, since a lot of people SEE the latter, and even the mercy fucker feels kinda good for donating the former!)

3* (agree VERY marginal LW, since they USED to be a couple, but are now only roomies!)

betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 11 years ago
Damn

I'm happy about one thing: That this was an extremely short tale.

HA Ha ha

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Well, I thought it was Oaky

errr, Okay I meant. Thanks for writing.

tom anon

bigguy323bigguy323over 11 years ago
Why is is posted?

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oakyoakyover 11 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the comments

Hello all. Thanks for your comments. I'm new and I guess I have lots to work on! Perhaps I posted it in the wrong category too.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
nice first try!

It was a nice first try and actually fairly well written. It seemed a bit rushed and left a lot of meat on the bone. I look forward to your next attempt.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
hey

try again this did not work

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Enjoyed it. Kinda fresh.

It's called a mercy fuck for a reason - and anyway a fuck is a fuck is a fuck. 4*

Keep writing.

BTTapBTTapover 11 years ago
Not a LW story

but I liked it anyway. I've been there, but not exactly. I've had a couple of ex-gfs who continued to be "with benefits". We knew there was no future, but there was friendship/comfort sex. It actually was pretty great-kind of paved the way to the next thing.....I liked the story-showed that sex can be an expression of caring and comfort.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
a beginning

...with no middle and a premature ejaculation.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 11 years ago
A sad story

I would imagine it was terrible for him to hear her making love to another man when he still loved her.

Thanks for the read.

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 11 years ago
Hey ! That's Not A Bad Way 2 Say Goodbye ( apologies to Leonard Cohen ) !

Well that is certainly one of the more sincere ways a good looking woman can show she's sorry . Good appetizer as a read. I like how the author took a healthy share of the blame in the two people not clicking as a couple. .

A very mature though abbreviated portrait was drawn as to the whys and wherefores of the breakup with no demonization of either party . In Literotica ... thats more then a little uncommon.

Rockyderek_caRockyderek_caover 11 years ago
I ponder

That if she truly still cared for him she would not have begun dating so quickly and sure as hell wouldn't bring the boy toy home with the ex still there. How could he not hear the goings on in her room? " you weren't supposed to hear"?? Not likely! Pretty callous behaviour on her part.

chytownchytownover 11 years ago
Thanks***

For the read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
And...

...where do you go from there?

Sub_HubbieSub_Hubbieover 11 years ago
clever

different. liked it.

Drbeamer3333Drbeamer3333over 11 years ago

Short and a bit of an odd ending. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
as they say where i come from

There's nowt as queer as folk

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
As my wife and I were in the process of dissolving our marriage, she was going out on dates and I was fortunate enough to not only hear them, but watch them a couple of times. Afterwards, once he had left, we would talk and eventually we both admitted it

I miss those tits

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Why is this story in this section?

It should be in the non consensual section.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Nice story

I enjoyed reading this one. I can't understand the thinking behind some of the petty comments.

Rolando1225Rolando1225almost 7 years ago

It's a look at a failled relationship between people who are sexually attracted, but one of them wasn't happy professionally and his unhappiness affected the relationship. They were better as friends with or without benefits. C'est la vie!

26thNC26thNCover 5 years ago
Out

You're well out of that. At least you didn't stay with a whore.

Just_WordsJust_Wordsover 3 years ago
I get it. Good job.

It's a moment in time, a relationship ending but not over, the pain, and finally the end. Don't listen to the critics and don't let the bean counters tell you what does and does not belong in the Loving Wives category. Good effort.

lc69hunterlc69hunterabout 2 years ago

Sometimes it just works that way. My ex and I couldn't let go of the sex for over a year

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

When I was in training to become a psychiatrist, our mentors would remind us that “life is a series of losses.”

Joy then sorrow (C.S. Lewis: That’s the Deal). Eighty percent of relationships don’t make it. Lots of sadness.

We’ve all felt OAKY’s experience and sadness in one way or another. Feelings linger, often for years.

Does anyone really forget someone they cared about? Hope not.

shr

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

you can't trust anyone not to fuck,

that’s what people do

John Updike

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