All Comments on 'She Helps Her Son-In-Law'

by Amavoyeur

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swfb70swfb70over 5 years ago
nice

wicked have likend the fucking to have been a bit more descriptive

am hoping his wife joins them for a 3 some in the next chapter

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 5 years ago
Very good

I love JAV. So this was very easy to imagine.

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518over 5 years ago
Nice

Nice story. I love how the bar kept getting raised from just letting him jerk off, to full on fucking.

journeyofselfjourneyofselfover 5 years ago
enjoyed!

I was mentally replacing your mother-in-law with mine. ...and I know she wants me

AmavoyeurAmavoyeurover 5 years agoAuthor
Further news.

Yes to comment from swfb70. I will have the wife, Amy, joining her husband and mother-in-law in a 3some in the next story that I'm going to write. It will be a stand-alone story.

4yourpleasureiam4yourpleasureiamover 5 years ago
This is one reason I long to be a true woman

To have those feelings as a Man uses his tool on me. I want to have a pussy and breasts and be desirable to a man. Feel him in me, my mouth my pussy and yes if he wants my ass. Owning me, and loving me.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Good premise.

Sex is much too rushed. Too abrubtly starting. Needed a lot more in the way of preliminaries before cock entered pussy.

Three stars.

HotdiggitydogHotdiggitydogabout 1 year ago

Sorry, I stopped reading when you entered the breeding realm. I know I was warned and I think I probably read this story once before and probably finished it. I just can't resist hot MIL stories. Please don't take this as a criticism. It's just not my thing... today. 4 stars for the story. Very well written... Ok I'm glad I finished it. Enjoyed the entire story

ss2ss4ss6ss2ss4ss628 days ago

Great build up, but ended just when things were just getting really good. And pregnancy is always a turn off.

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