All Comments on 'She Meets Her Match'

absolutly terrible, I hopw you have a day job.

Unusual story, but terrible it is NOT! It is well told, using mostly good grammar, and at least it is a plausible story. He gave her a second chance, which she took, and she overlooked his indiscretion. I think the story was entertaining.

Good good good story!

Love the way she has let herself go and only realizes it when confronted with a newer, younger, tighter versin of herself.

Well done!

The perfect "Loving Wives" story!!

Fuck, I want more!!!

Well written and well plotted...I enjoyed your characters MidnightDream...thank you!

Really lousy. I can't believe i wasted my time on this junk

Not my cup of tea. Wife was a self absorbed bitch, with no redeeming qualities. Waste of time reading this.

What I see are two people who have fundamentally changed their personalities. Hubby's conversion is much slower and attributable, in large part, to his dominant position in his profession. Sweetie's conversion is MUCH more rapid and much more difficult to believe! I think a more realistic (well, relatively) ending, such as Hubby dropping Sweetie and hooking up with the apprentice, would be received better!

which could really do with a second chapter... one where he "punishes" Julie... and effectively forces his wife to be okay with it.

Well this goes in the top ten worst stories.

i can only think this role reversal story shows just how, at best implausable worst disgustingly spineless a person would have to be to allow this one sided crap. if thats the case solid job

More stupid vicious fetish shit where we are supposed to think men who cheat are good guys

If you still write,Get lost, this is non con

And childish.

Seems more like a midnight nightmare. Silly damn story.

I’m not sure this site has a proper category for this story.

Havent had a babygirl saying "Fuck me Daddy".

The shrewish MC and her philandering husband are both despicable. They are perfect for each other. By remaining together each spares other potential spouses the misery of being tied up in a relationship with them. Hope she and Tom stay cuffed to each other for the rest of their lives.

Story pretty much sucked all the way through.

Your story sucked and would rate a -25.

Need I say more?

I don’t understand his anger towards Julie.

Interesting! Very innnnteeereeeesstiiing!

Not my cup of tea but well done!

Well written, descriptive sex scenes, a lot of emotional stuff but not really defined characters, and the ending doesn’t address the issues that led to the ending let alone resolved them. It’s okay but great. I wondered if you were going for a full cuckquean role but if they are switching with each other then you left out how they dealt with the cheating, deciding to stay together and building a new relationship. Nor was the power dynamic between them before and after the events here. I would suggest that if this ending was the goal then perhaps the beginning would make better sense if the reader understood why the wife accept the changes of the relationship. If she’s a control freak who’s just found out she doesn’t know the man she married and he is cheating on her, how in the hell does she possibly change into the person she’s described to be at the end

Grammar was ok and in the beginning the characters were developed. The wife was getting well deserved payback and then Tom is written to have developed into a gym stud and lost half his IQ. No explanation about why he chose wife over young intelligent hottie.