All Comments on 'She Pt. 01 - Ascension'

This was really well written and thought out. I think most women will have had that feeling of being sexually abused/used at least once in their life and the description of her disappointment at not being in someway compensated was for me quite heart wrenching because that would be the norm! This will stick with me for a bit, really thought provoking thank you

I suppose it would be insulting to the spirit of the story to hope that in her new career she would gather the resources to be able to take revenge on her abuser and have him throat fucked raw! I'm enjoying the fantasy though, there's gonna be anal too!

This story was so POWERFUL!! Well written fantasy and REALLY gets you to imagine the entire scene. AMAZING job! When he came on her face it was a total shock not only to her but to me as well and it literally pushed me over the edge in my mind! A++++

Great start! The writing is very well done, it really pulled me in. I hope you continue this!