All Comments on 'She Smells Like Apricot Nectar'

by Valkyrie897

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jenorma2012jenorma2012over 6 years ago
ok

it was alright, there was no build up at all, it was just jumping into sex

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
well done to the author

well done got me quite well :p

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Hmm

I'm unsure when this waa written, but it reminds me of a 90's romcom/soft porn, or anything a man would write.

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I'm just an amateur writer that likes to do erotic short stories. My stories are written to appeal to Kinksters, and uploaded to Fetlife.