All Comments on 'She Wanted It Too'

This shows an author that hasn't a clue about proper secntence structure nor grammar. The frequent and over use of "..." and the ' ?". (good hell use one or the other not both) show no skills and should either get an editor or learn how to write.

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@cockimusmaximus - for goodness sake either do some Proof-reading, get a good Proof-reader to do it for you or get yourself a good Editor!

Preferably get yourself a good Editor AND a good Proof-reader!!

Some examples of stupid and completely un-necessary errors -

"Other then the time she went to college." - Huh? - 'than'?

"We had our chance in counters that …" - should this be 'encounters'?

"I left it there a little longer as I spotted some pictures but the mirror." - what's this supposed to mean? - 'by the mirror'?

"I rubbed my balls up her crack to the top her ass …" - word missing?

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A rather well told story which holds the reader's attention. It ALMOST deserves a higher rating.

try wanking not writing if you could find it

That was good. It got me hot and bothered 👍

Love it, I thought about my 7 cousins