by ainu2
This a good read for me. I trust you will keep this in "Romance", they are good together, hate to see it get spoiled, by adultrey, rape, drugs, etc... Its always good to see a sexy loving relationship grow. Thank you.
I agree with Anonymous, a very nice start but it's clear the story is not finished yet... so I will be eagerly anticipating further adventures of Gloria and Jack. As with Anonymous, I too would prefer to keep it in the "Romantic" category.
This really is well-written (way above those other trash submissions that people think (or pretend to think) are well-written.
In other words, you're one in ten-thousand. Great story. Great Sex. Keep it up!
Eileen in San Rafael
She knew what and who she wanteand went after him. Good for her need more like her. A good and fun story. 5 stars
Mack
Good story but you missed a perfect ending by having a twin sucking milk from each of Gloria's breasts. (Hubby still had her twat to snatch onto,after all.
am at the age where the only thing that gets stiff on me is my neck and that hurts
but for a couple of minutes there my neck didn't bother me at all