All Comments on 'She was a Better Man than I'

When an author writes "What could be more sexier..." in the description of their story, you can tell, without wasting any of your time, that they can't write for shit. I appreciate that fact that you advertise your mediocrity so blatantly. I don't like to waste my time on poorly written crap, so being able to see that, and keep on skimming for what might be a decent story is a refreshing and unexpected reward. "What could be more sexy..." or "What could be sexier..." might have sucked me in only to be disappointed, but "What could be 'MORE SEXIER' ..."? That assures any prospective readers that this person's writing skills suck dog cock. Keep on fucking up your grammar on the first thing a reader encounters, please. I mean it, please. Keep on saving me time.

Uhh, almost anything.

i hate these idots that coment like the first three , if u are not into this do not read it and waste everyone's time that enjoys a very hot story.

And i think angie is very very sexy and would love to spend a weekend with her, and I AM NOT GAY

kept up the good stories , if they are stories or keep up the writings of real happenings

Well told sexy tale of the forbidden fantasy. Good stuff.

Story itself was crap, but not the worst I've read on here. As for the bashers well, notice how the haters are always anonymous? Never have the balls to post under a name? 'Nuff said.

And to the guy defending the story, no, you're NOT gay if you like a girl with a penis because SHE'S STILL A GIRL!!!

What a nice story, we aren't all ready to quickly move on, you'll find another

I would not mind meeting someone like Angie <3

By the time the story got around to the sex, it was over in a couple of sentences.

The sentence beginning with "By Monday, I was in love..." implies that they were together over a weekend, but the starting day is never mentioned. Was it Friday they met? Saturday? What happened from the first sex act through to Monday that made Ross fall in love with Angie?

When it comes right down to it, there was too much left unsaid for this to be considered to be a complete story.

And based on the title, how exactly was Angie a "better man" than Ross? That was never mentioned. Usually in a TS story, that implies that the girl is better hung than the guy, but that didn't appear to be the case here.

How about just about anything? Stupid, nasty story of abuse.

Where is there an Angie for me? Too short of a story.

This story could easily be made into multiple chapters. I’d love to be able to read more about Angie and what happens to her.