All Comments on 'She Was An Architect'

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
I THINK SHE DOESNT WANT TO BE VIOLATED

and the punch line fits a lot of situations. TK U MLJ LV NV

LexiRoseLexiLexiRoseLexialmost 12 years ago
I like this

But I don't know why.

I suppose I expected a page two so the ending was a little abrupt. I'm left wondering whether he liked it and continued I just don't know, for me it stopped too soon.

estragonestragonalmost 12 years agoAuthor
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And Frank Merrill could keep his mother in the nursing home for another year, while he prayed she would de and end both their miseries.|No, And Frank Merrill could keep his mother in the nursing home for another year, while he prayed she would die and end both their miseries.--Dammit, don’t you read this shit before you post it?

"Turn around, cunt, I want to fuck you filthy cunt from behind.| No, unless he’s Italian and not English: "Turn around, cunt, I want to fuck your filthy cunt from behind.

Polly_DollyPolly_Dollyabout 1 year ago

Amazing what a burst of confidence will do for someone’s resolve. Idea strikes, fantasy supplanted by reality, harassment stymied, end of story!

chasbo38chasbo389 months ago

Do not understand what you are trying to say in writing this story.

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