All Comments on 'She Wolf Ch. 07'

Hi I really love this story can't wait for more

The more I read this story, the more I like it.

To use an old country saying, you're still cooking with hot grease! Love, care, support, over coming bad guys, intrigue..... keep it coming.

Loved the Chapter and can not wait to read more

I really like this story, can't wait for another chapter!!

Margaret may be mistaken about Levin's feelings toward her; he just might surprise her.

While the content as always was good, I couldn't help but notice that this chapter didn't flow quite as well as some of the previous ones have. It seemed a little choppy, which made it a little more difficult to read. I don't mean to sound like a grammar nazi or anything, but it really does make a difference in the way things read. Otherwise, it was good. I'm glad that Kyra and Malcolm have acknowledged their mates and that BJ and Julianne have mated. I'll be interested to see what happens with Margaret and Levin next.

Loved it. Keep writing.

Something inside your writer brain seems to have gone click w/this story. Each chapter really is better than the previous. Now having gushed over you let me tell you what I liked about tis chapter. I'm looking forward to the births so I can see Nicky again. I can't wait the birth of the new pups cause if the dads are this nervous now it can only get funnier. The way BJ and Juli got together was great. When she ask him to shift all the pressure was off BJ and there relationship took it's final step. And then finally Kyra and Malcolm have finally stated how they feel about one another.

Job/chapter well done and I look forward to the next installment of "She Wolf".

Each chapter has continued to improve. Really enjoy the story and I am glad I stuck with reading it thus far. <3 keep going.

I agree with a previous writer, each chapter adds greatly to the story. I look forward to a chapter where Nicky brings her son to the compound and they are introduced to Nina & Celia's children.

Blessings,

This installment I gave 3 stars, " A man was with her mother, and Kyra rushed to embrace the man." Kyra was in a different state at this point the character referred to was Julianne. Also earlier Celia stated that they were going to have another son, but now they refer to a daughter. I usually totally ignore typos and things that need correction but this is effecting the plot line.

Celia never said she was going to have a son. Blaine was the one who said they were having another son. If you had paid attention to a paragraph or two below that, you would have noticed Celia said, "She..." when referring to the baby.

Ir2r.... *smiles* Another really good chapter. Now I'm on to the next chapter... *grins*

I hope there are another 43 chapters

I love it ,I like the Quotes at the begging I think that Jules Mom is going to be with the lawyer