All Comments on 'She-Wolf'

Perhaps a little too much emphasis on size for me, but well written.

A nice fantasy spin on the butch/femme role. I loved this!

Wonderfully written through and through!!!

amazing

I'd love to read more

a promising premise...

Lol, man, this is awesome.

Nadia's so like me o_O

Idk who my Ligia is though q.q

But yeah, awesome~

I read this one 14 times

its awesome

really to the power infinity awesome

The best I've read by far....... keep up the good job

I think you put a spell on this story i am totally addicted to it already i really wish that it would have been more, if it was like that i would still read it over and over again.

This should probably go in the "Nonconsent" section

This story is wild

The core story was not overly surprising, though I expect it was probably meant to be.

It was the all-encompassing environment that we learned next to nothing about that was the whole appeal of the story. Not the pagan nature of it, per se, but the mystery of it coupled with the primitive nature of it. Without the statement about being christians, it would have felt quite at home in an era of celts and druids. But being christians threw me off. Certainly there was a complex overlap between pagan and christian, once the Romans began leaving the Isles, but that didn't feel right either.

With a bit more description, like hair colors, we might be able to place it better, perhaps Gaul, post-Romans.

As you can tell, I found it enticing, though not particularly erotic, the only sex being carried out by a piece of wood. Nor did It have a "lesbian" feel to it. It was more like two women literally pretending to be man and wife.

Turn this story into one with three or four times the number of words, letting us see and feel the environment in depth, and getting to know these two women and their history, and it'd probably have been a top-notch winner.