All Comments on 'Sheep's Clothing'

And I don't mean that as in "That was so good, I wanted more!" This chapter was too short to be anything besides an excerpt meant to catch attention. There is almost no plot or character development. In fact, there's not really much of anything. This story might be good or bad, but until you actually put enough time and effort into making a chapter that takes longer than 30 seconds to read, you're not doing it justice.