All Comments on 'Sheik Omar Ch. 01'

by RubiaLaFaye

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RubiaLaFayeRubiaLaFayealmost 8 years agoAuthor
typo's

I noticed I overlooked some typo's when submitting it. Do not worry in the final version I will edit them all out.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Excited!

Loved it!!! 5* from me! Seems a very promising story, and I am so happy to see more from you! Typos were few and far between, and didn't bother me one bit, so please keep the updates coming! I can't wait to see what happens, when Mary wakes up and find out whatever happened to Charles. I'm also dying to see how the suspected romance between the Sheikh and Mary develops. Please update soon!!!

All The Best!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
her 10 year old brother

must be such a wonder...flying biplanes and being the legal guardian at age 10 must be extraordinary....

RubiaLaFayeRubiaLaFayealmost 8 years agoAuthor
I warned you :)

Hahahahaha I warned you in advance some typo's had stayed under the radar but indeed this one is hilarious :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Actually, her 10 year older brother

I misread it the first time too...lol.

Promising story so didn't mind few mistakes...

RubiaLaFayeRubiaLaFayealmost 8 years agoAuthor
2 more chapters

I just submitted 2 more chapters. One in romance and one in interracial love.

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