All Comments on 'Shelly'

Okay, change your character's name. But pay attention to it, at least!

Your story was great. I loved it. It was so passionate and arousing. I would love to read more from you. As for the previous comment, I don't see where the name changes from Sandra to Shelly, unless you already changed it. Then again, I was so caught up in your story that I hardly paid any attention to anything but the story.

I loved this story...when are you going to write a continuation.I hope soon....Keep up the great writing!!!

Well written. Although, I will tell you that I was a bit confused about the title being Shelly and then "Sandra" made an appearance. Part of me kept wondering when Shelly was going to pop out of the woodwork and wreck havoc on the whole affair. I am quite pleased she didn't. I appreciated your usage of language and writing skills. The fact that the story was entertaining and enjoyable, with the other points, its a rarity on this site, and quite refreshing to read. Thank you.