All Comments on 'Shelter in the Storm Ch. 10'

This story is so badly written in so many ways,the basics were good but the telling of the tale...bad bad bad

Hey dinkyboots you dumb@$$. that's what the rating system is for! Nothing much below a 4.6 is worth reading so stop wasting our time tilling us stories are bad when we already know. You fuck.

boring shite

I love this story. it was fantastic..I couldnt stop reading until the end.

I hope to read more gay love stories form u!!