All Comments on 'Sheppard's Seed Ch. 02'

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digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 15 years ago
He knocks them all up

It's too bad she didn't come back for another ride, and have some more of his big cock. Maybe he could give her another baby, that could become an every year event.

BjorntufukBjorntufukover 12 years ago

Man, Your stories are all awesome but way too short. I would love an unedited version of this. It deserves at least a few pages.

OOAAOOAAalmost 11 years ago
Congratuations !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Thanks for this excellent story!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Too Simple

Erratic story. Underdeveloped connection with mystery hook-up woman who bears his child with nary a thought of consequence from the sire. Not believable or entertaining. Disappointing.

26thNC26thNCover 2 years ago

Just the usual whorewife and cuckold garbage, just a little more putrid than usual.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Hmmmm that dialogue between yhe character was pretty wooden and generally bad... i think you need to work on this aspect

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