All Comments on 'She's a Naughty Little Housewife Ch. 01'

by BeautifulAmanda

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VULCAN4231VULCAN4231about 16 years ago
We Cannot Have This

Housewives getting all frustrated,its bad for the ecomomy.Deprived of dick they go raving mad with credit cards,no seriously sod the size of tits[I know plenty of women with hugeeeee tits]this is as it should be ,an erotic story on an erotic site

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
neglected ?

If she feels this way, why not tell her husband what she feels instead of letting frustration get to her and has her looking for an affair. Work can indeed be consuming, and if one is wrapped up too much in it, it could certainly give this feeling to the other partner. The question is why he works that much. Is it to provide for a better life for both of them. Is there more to it as she seems to think? Or is she just bored and trying to find some justification to start an affair. Her thinking of "if he comes on to me tonight, I won't do it, If not, too bad ...". Wouldn't it have been so much better to tell her husband "I need you so much. It's been too long? Or even ask him straight if he is seeing someone else cause it's been so long. Or whatever she could TELL him to express her feelings and/or her fear instead of just parading around. If he still continues to neglect her, she should tell him that she expects more from a marriage, that she needs love and attention and sex too and if he cannot give her that anymore, that her life is empty and maybe they should get divorced. After that, she is free to pursue other interests. Let's see what happens now that she started on the path of betrayal. Or is he indeed doing the same ? G.Belgium

don87654don87654about 16 years ago
Hot for it, and Pregged?

I look forward to reading more of this one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Great Story

Hi - I think your story is great ! You start with the background, then go to the reason Amanda is looking for sex. Now you add the other man and lay out a picture we can follow and then they have sex. Not bad to begin a multi-chapter story.

I would suggest that Amanda take control of this guy and let her show him how horny she is. Next, maybe she wants to suck him or have him tit fuck her. She said I am a bigger nympho, so tell us how much. Go back to her girlfriend Carey and let them eat each other as Amanda tells of her sex play. Thanks !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
You

Last comment should learn to spell.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Thank you, most enjoyable

I enjoyed it, I liked the thoughts going on behind the instant messages, and the description of the outfit she wore, and her thoughts on what she wanted.

I hope you write a 2nd part.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
OK

Could have been longer. The sex scene was way to quick. 8 1/2 inches is pretty impressive. No mention of how the big cock filled her or how it felt once inside her. Great storyline though.

bornagainbornagainalmost 16 years ago
Another cuckold story

Yes its another cuckold story where the stupid wife doesn`t even consider talking to the husband to get him to talk to her and seek marriage counceling instead she fucks around with another man who don`t give a rats ass wht happend`s to the husband or the wife but himself and she flushes the marriage down the toilet.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
One nice wet naughty hot housewife.

love the title naughty house wife

Good start to the first fucking story. can't wait to read more.

don87654don87654over 15 years ago
Breeding?

Wow! I liked the comment about no little condoms. Maybe someone is going to get bred by someone other than her husband?

grogers7grogers7over 15 years ago
Backseat of a Corvette?

They made love on the backseat of his black Corvette? This is a comedy, right?

BetterEndingBetterEndingover 11 years ago
Ho Hum

Just one more story glorifying a woman who does not care enough about her marriage to try and fix it. She really just wants an excuse to fuck around. The world would be a much better place without such women. The story might be reasonable if it had some consequences. But then it would not be able to glorify her whoring ways would it?

26thNC26thNCabout 5 years ago
Poor little whore

She feels neglected because her doctor husband has to work long hours so she can stay home and have time to be a cheating whore. Maybe doc can arrange a double ballectomy for Dan and divorce for the whore.

WillupbossWillupbossalmost 5 years ago
Back Seat?

Pretty amazing what they could accomplish in the backseat of a Corvette considering Corvettes don’t even have a back seat. Even if it were a standard sedan they couldn’t have moved around while undressing the way you described. Do a little research while writing your stories.

By the way, I already despise Amanda.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Nice catch, Will,

I was just going to make the same comment about 'Vettes not now, or ever having a back seat. Not to mention the numerous syntax errors.

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