by Bhob
Your choice of words are what turned me on the most. They were new, and different, and hot.
purely awesome. liked the final confrontation and the broken word structure as they fucked.
Excellent writing and a great story line...I'm sure you could continue for another chapter or two!!!
A bit verbose but well written.
Not very original, many stepfathers fantasise this situation as I know from experience!
I thought your story was well written abd believable. I'm sure there is plenty of room left for additional chapters, so get busy:)
This is pretty amazing! Ive just been swimming in the fun of it! Hehe;)
Even if he put up with her side fucking all those years, I'm surprised that he didn't corner her asking her if she was making the fuckers wear condoms every time! Hell, that could eat on your nerves worse than her cheating; not knowing if she was bringing you a nice virulent disease the next time she fucked you:/(
Looking forward to reading the rest of the chapters, thanks for writing!