All Comments on 'She's A Slut'

by Bhob

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Your choice of words.....

Your choice of words are what turned me on the most. They were new, and different, and hot.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
damn good

purely awesome. liked the final confrontation and the broken word structure as they fucked.

mofarmermofarmeralmost 20 years ago
Great

Excellent writing and a great story line...I'm sure you could continue for another chapter or two!!!

mikeperkmikeperkalmost 20 years ago
Every man's fantasy

A bit verbose but well written.

Not very original, many stepfathers fantasise this situation as I know from experience!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
Great Start

I thought your story was well written abd believable. I'm sure there is plenty of room left for additional chapters, so get busy:)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago

good story bro keep it up

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Absolutely loved it!!

This is pretty amazing! Ive just been swimming in the fun of it! Hehe;)

Even if he put up with her side fucking all those years, I'm surprised that he didn't corner her asking her if she was making the fuckers wear condoms every time! Hell, that could eat on your nerves worse than her cheating; not knowing if she was bringing you a nice virulent disease the next time she fucked you:/(

Looking forward to reading the rest of the chapters, thanks for writing!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Want

I so wish my step daughter would start fucking me like this

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