All Comments on 'She's Gonna Be A Star Ch. 08'

by flinchny010

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KnickersKnickersabout 20 years ago
Ali is a babe

Good to see Ali's point-of-view. Look forward to more of her adventures, esp. seeing how she keeps her customers happy at the diner, and some more gigs.

hedomanhedomanabout 20 years ago
WOW! Great story!

I'm in awe over your writing ability. I never thought that I would actually enjoy a story that depicted a woman who loathed herself so much that she would let strangers in the park spit in her mouth in order to please her 'master', but I did!

blackgblackgover 10 years ago
Loved it!!!

Always keep coming back to these Ali stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
great story

I wish more authors wrote like you do. This is hypnotic!

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